Fortunately, there shouldn't be any more scenes of romance to that degree.
The next chapter will also start the action, so that should hopefully be better.
The Epic: A Story by Hebes
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Re: The Epic: A Story by Hebes
Yeah, that was basically the most awkward part of the story to write. I knew people would either think it was OK, or absolutely hate it. (I don't even like how it turned out myself, now that I think about it)
Fortunately, there shouldn't be any more scenes of romance to that degree.
The next chapter will also start the action, so that should hopefully be better.
Fortunately, there shouldn't be any more scenes of romance to that degree.
The next chapter will also start the action, so that should hopefully be better.