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Lola Sayu - The Citadel

Posted: Mon Oct 03, 2011 1:01 pm
by AhsokaTano
Koh-toh-yah, (hi in Kel Dor :lol: )
This is my first map.
It's The Citadel of The Clone Wars chapters:

- 3x18 The Citadel
- 3x19 Counterattack
- 3x20 Citadel Rescue

I advise watch this chapters. Because you will know where you go.
The walls are destroyables.
I made some objects, for example:

- The Citadel building.
- Walls.
- Caves.
- Lava floor.
- And pipes.

Some pictures:
Hidden/Spoiler:
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Destroyable walls
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You survive
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The Caves
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The Citadel
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Link:

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=T2NSX20L
http://www.gamefront.com/files/20856598 ... itadel.rar


Thanks:

Gametoast (thanks :D ) for help me and for the tutorials
Lucasarts, for create the game and the ModTools


Install:

Put LSY folder in your Star Wars Battlefront II/GameData/addon.
For playing: Instant Action and select Lola Sayu.
To remove the map: Delete LSY folder from Star Wars Battlefront II/GameData/addon

Thanks for all.

I hope you like :D

Re: Lola Sayu - The Citadel

Posted: Mon Oct 03, 2011 1:58 pm
by [Padawan]Helkaan
:shock: Looks really, really, really nice. Really.
Hidden/Spoiler:
D/Ling now, in other words
:thumbs:

Re: Lola Sayu - The Citadel

Posted: Mon Oct 03, 2011 2:02 pm
by naru1305
[Padawan]Helkaan wrote::shock: Looks really, really, really nice. Really.
Hidden/Spoiler:
D/Ling now, in other words
:thumbs:
agreed
it looks really nice

Re: Lola Sayu - The Citadel

Posted: Mon Oct 03, 2011 2:16 pm
by AhsokaTano
Thanks. I'm happy you like :D

I work on this map about 2 weeks ago.

Re: Lola Sayu - The Citadel

Posted: Mon Oct 03, 2011 5:39 pm
by Marth8880
The only two things I do not like about this map is the lighting and its presence on MegaUpload rather than MediaFire or Filefront.

Re: Lola Sayu - The Citadel

Posted: Mon Oct 03, 2011 7:02 pm
by ShadowWing
Ah. Lola Sayu. I've been waiting for some map like this.

This map looks very well done, but I think that it needs to be more purplish.
Other than that, it looks great! I'll download when I can.

Re: Lola Sayu - The Citadel

Posted: Mon Oct 03, 2011 7:54 pm
by RedFaceofAwesomeness
Looks very good!

Re: Lola Sayu - The Citadel

Posted: Mon Oct 03, 2011 9:18 pm
by ShadowWing
Okay, so I downloaded and played this map.

The layout of the map was very well done; I like your use of Kamino and Kashyyyk props, the destroyable walls, and the custom Jet Trooper.

Some things that can improve the map:
-Add more speed vehicles. The CIS doesn't have a lot of STAPS, and the Republic could use some BARC speeders.
-Anakin and Obi-Wan are classes and heroes.
-The Anakin and Obi-Wan classes have a lightsaber health bar. Since it takes a while to get from one command post to the other, you should probably remove the health bar.
-The CIS also needs some special side or the other.


EDIT: AshokaTano, is Spanish the language that you speak?

Re: Lola Sayu - The Citadel

Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2011 10:00 am
by AhsokaTano
Ok. I upload it to filefront:

http://www.gamefront.com/files/20856598 ... itadel.rar
ShadowWing wrote:Okay, so I downloaded and played this map.

The layout of the map was very well done; I like your use of Kamino and Kashyyyk props, the destroyable walls, and the custom Jet Trooper.

Some things that can improve the map:
-Add more speed vehicles. The CIS doesn't have a lot of STAPS, and the Republic could use some BARC speeders.
-Anakin and Obi-Wan are classes and heroes.
-The Anakin and Obi-Wan classes have a lightsaber health bar. Since it takes a while to get from one command post to the other, you should probably remove the health bar.
-The CIS also needs some special side or the other.


EDIT: AshokaTano, is Spanish the language that you speak?
Yes. I have problems with vehicles.
I don't know how to put a normal life to Anakin and Obi Wan.
And yes, i thought on commando droids, but i don't know how to make a new droid.

The version 2.0 is coming.
The next version have a Space Map and the things that i can improve.

PD: Yes. I speak Spanish. My English isn't very good...

Re: Lola Sayu - The Citadel

Posted: Thu Oct 06, 2011 3:46 pm
by CressAlbane
One thing I would reccomend is to edit in the .sky file to change the blue color of the fog.

Re: Lola Sayu - The Citadel

Posted: Fri Oct 07, 2011 9:25 am
by AhsokaTano
Ok. I will put this in 2.0 version :D

Re: Lola Sayu - The Citadel

Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2011 1:08 am
by 111alan
Impressive,most impressive。

Re: Lola Sayu - The Citadel

Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2011 10:01 am
by Fiodis
Judging from the pictures the map's somewhat open and empty around the citadel, and the terrain's sharp and could use blending.

Re: Lola Sayu - The Citadel

Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2011 12:28 pm
by AhsokaTano
Yes, i thought in that and in the 2.0 version i will fixed.

Re: Lola Sayu - The Citadel

Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2011 4:17 pm
by vocanus
Very nice man, for the next version you can use the BX commando droid, find it here forums/viewtopic.php?f=64&t=20521

Re: Lola Sayu - The Citadel

Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2011 4:54 pm
by AhsokaTano
vocanus wrote:Very nice man, for the next version you can use the BX commando droid, find it here forums/viewtopic.php?f=64&t=20521
Thanks!! I will used it for the next version. And, i'm a girl xD.